Thursday, December 16, 2010

Wanna be my friend?

Do you find life,
a roller coaster ride,
With fortune favoring
your opponent's side!

Do you some times feel,
you lost the stake,
When the game was there
for you to take!

Do you some times feel,
Had you told her,
Your life could have been full,
You may not have been a loner!

Still do you feel,
world's a great place to be,
With each drop of joy
Reverberating through
the pain-filled sea.

If the above said guy
sounds like you,
Come be my friend
For I am like that too.........


Anonymous said...

A very 'approprate' poem. And yes, we could be friends ;-)
Brilliantly Rhymed!

deekay said...

he he....thnx DS..he he(evil laugh)

unknown poet said...

this poem depicts me.....:)...hatz off ma friend.. ;D

deekay said...

thnx UP..;-)

Spaceman said...

the second-last paragraph made me bring my thinking cap out of the box. What makes life meaningful and still worth to live.. after all that you described in the paragraphs before it, which are the facts. Clearly there must be more to life than what we think is important.

Putting those thoughts aside, a very good poem that rhymes and is a great read with a message; the last line was a master tough.

deekay said...

thnx spaceman.......and regarding life....wud recommend u 2 read Siddartha and get more confused about it.......;-)

kannadigaru naavu said...

good one...i hope if i had understood that it will be much better......

deekay said...

welcom Kannadigaru naavu to deekayrites :)....thnx for stopping by and taking time to leave a comment.....